I took a step closer to the black shadow infront of me. Widened my eyes. A dead body pouring out with blood and a stack of cash in his hand. 140 characters exact. By Lily
I had a look on the guardian for some twitter fiction and I one that I quite liked... Katie price: He fastened the diamond necklace round her neck: "Happy anniversary, babe." It seemed the wrong time to tell him she was leaving.
I really liked this because its quite tense between them and its like ended on a cliffhanger so makes you think what's going to happen next?...
She put posin in the tea, gave it to him, after a while he stared chocking then he died, she could hear the police siren then she ran away FOREVER! Fiza
"Hurry," whispered Sally. "They might catch us!" Sally was clutching a small handkerchief with a small object wrapped inside so it didn't drip. by Alexandria :)
Homework: When my parents told me that we were hosting a family from earth, I didn't know whether to be glad, or to sulk or just lose my temper. I'm really scared to see a family from earth that as well for the first time, "OH NO!" "What if they don't like me what will I do?" "Lets hope for the best."
The girl grabbed his shoulder and spun him round forcefully. "YOU'RE DEAD." The girl shouted in his ear. Her eyes were daggers.
ReplyDeleteOh Yeah ^ That was Mia
ReplyDeleteThere was a knock at the door, but there was nobody there. I found a knife covered with blood. I took a step back. Iheard a scream...
ReplyDeletei like this twitter fiction
DeleteCelina
I love the way you used short sentences to make it more powerful.
DeleteLily
I repeated the comment above by accident sorry. I was meant to say it seems very suspicious and I like it
DeleteLily
Milly lent back and zapped the dragon.POOF! The dragon turned into a mouse. Then Milly's cat ate it. BAD CAT. by sofia
ReplyDeleteWhy did I not stop them? Because I was in shock, because I panicked. Now they are gone. Gone for good. My life will never be the same again.
ReplyDeleteMolly
I really liked the way you used a question molly, it made it have more effect.
DeleteLily
i agree with Lily. :)
DeleteFiza
It only took one person to make me feel like I wasn't human. Only one action to make me feel like I didn't belong. Now I am nothing, no one.
ReplyDeleteMolly
I'm not afraid oof dieing not afraid for my heart to stop,but sitting here waiting for a man who can end me in a click was to much...click
ReplyDeleteLena
With a click, the door opens. My worst nightmare had come rue. He was standing there. I grabbed my knife and aimed to kill.
ReplyDeleteIsabella
i love this twitter fiction
DeleteCelina
I love the way you used short sentences to make it more powerful.
DeleteLily
yes, i agree with you Lily
DeleteGeorgia
She knew the knife had punctured her lung and there was no use in trying, so she leaned back and closed her eyes...
ReplyDeleteJess
I took a step closer to the black shadow infront of me. Widened my eyes. A dead body pouring out with blood and a stack of cash in his hand.
ReplyDelete140 characters exact.
By Lily
"Go!" screamed rabbit as he looked down at the gruesome hole in his leg. He knew time was up for him. The hunter had won this time.
ReplyDeleteCelina
wow,that's very good Celina i like the way you used the short sentence at the end it was very effective
DeleteGeorgia
I had a look on the guardian for some twitter fiction and I one that I quite liked...
ReplyDeleteKatie price: He fastened the diamond necklace round her neck: "Happy anniversary, babe."
It seemed the wrong time to tell him she was leaving.
I really liked this because its quite tense between them and its like ended on a cliffhanger so makes you think what's going to happen next?...
i opened the old, oak door, my hand shook my heart was pounding. i couldn't believe my eyes at the dark figure standing there. finally...
ReplyDeleteGeorgia
"jump you can do it" demanded the voice inside my head "I can do it". I knew what would happen if I didn't!
ReplyDeleteGeorgia
She put posin in the tea, gave it to him, after a while he stared chocking then he died, she could hear the police siren then she ran away FOREVER!
ReplyDeleteFiza
To: Fiza
DeleteI loved Reading your twitter fiction, Its so good and adventurous, Well done
-Ayşe
Thank you
DeleteShe slowly moved away, throwing the stained knife down the drain. "HOW?" She thought "How could I of been so stupid?" She fell to the floor.
ReplyDeleteBy Lucy
"Hurry," whispered Sally. "They might catch us!" Sally was clutching a small handkerchief with a small object wrapped inside so it didn't drip.
ReplyDeleteby Alexandria :)
As i wipe the tears streaming down my face, wishing for a better day, now she is gone forever!as heaven gained a angel
ReplyDelete- Ayse
I really loved yours, i loved the way you used short sentences really good Well Done!
Deleteoh yes that's was me Fiza
DeleteSuddenly all the lights flashed out. You could hear footsteps coming closer and closer. Then there was nothing, not a sound in the old house
ReplyDeletescarlett
wow great cliff hanger and very spooky I love it
DeleteThe young girl came running into the house drenched from head to toe in blood, but if it was blood, whose was it?
ReplyDeleteBy Fara
I like that you used a question!
DeleteLily
She climbed to the top of the towering tree but as she looked above the tree, all she could see was her reflection. She was trapped.
ReplyDeleteBy Fara
"Runnning away from death is all I can remember" "good" "do you remember who I am" "no" "who you are" "I am nobody".... "she is ready"
ReplyDeleteBy Lena
I ran and ran, kept looking back,saw his bloodshot eyes, screamed even though no one was there. Hands shaking hands
ReplyDeletejelly legs, here we go
Labibah
he man on the Northern line pulled a long blond hair from the sleeve of his black jacket; regarded its length; let it drift to the floor.
ReplyDeleteFiza
"Your wish?" snapped the genie. "And no, you can't have all the wishes in the world."
ReplyDelete"I wish for 1,000 magic lamps, each with a genie."
Fiza
The old grey woman gave a long and hard stare at the young man as he rode into the deep and gloomy forest on his ebony horse.
ReplyDeleteFaith
We followed the foot prints in the sand. We heard a noise and looked up... They found us.
ReplyDeleteNavya
Florence got back into her house, entered her bedroom and all that was left was an empty room with an open window.
ReplyDeleteby the way this is charlotte
ReplyDeleteI heard a loud bang so I slowly walked outside and saw that the remains of Peter was a pile of ashes it could have been lightning...
ReplyDeleteCrash bang and the world fell silent alex flexed his hand ,he was still alive.Heart pumping he reached for it.but it wasnt there!
ReplyDeleteJulia
"RUN!" I screamed at lily. "GO!" She ran. It was me against them. At least Lily was safe. Or was she?
ReplyDeleteIsabella
I like the retolical question at the end.
DeleteMia
Homework:
ReplyDeleteWhen my parents told me that we were hosting a family from earth, I didn't know whether to be glad, or to sulk or just lose my temper. I'm really scared to see a family from earth that as well for the first time, "OH NO!" "What if they don't like me what will I do?" "Lets hope for the best."
By Fiza